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More Chinese Weather Related Text
« on: December 02, 2020, 04:06:41 AM »
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Re: More Chinese Weather Related Text
« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2020, 10:02:46 AM »
Hi ren, nice work, and thank you for sharing!

Just a little comment: you have translated some sentences with 持世 as "supports Self".  But I've seen you translate it as "at Self" too.  The latter is more correct.  I'm afraid a reader can interpret "support" as something else than 持
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Re: More Chinese Weather Related Text
« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2020, 08:37:30 PM »
Hey All,

I know I have been losing  a few brain cells - with Trump and all.

I knew I did a number of translations about weather, but I could not find them. I also lost a lot of data on a dead laptop etc.

I posted the above and a number of other translations on weather before. @JLim, should I post the link here or post the translation text?

Thanks

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Re: More Chinese Weather Related Text
« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2020, 05:39:02 PM »
Just a little comment: you have translated some sentences with 持世 as "supports Self".  But I've seen you translate it as "at Self" too.  The latter is more correct.  I'm afraid a reader can interpret "support" as something else than 持
ren, I have made the necessary corrections, which you will notice the red font with strikeout signs.
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